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	<description>dale emery learns to write</description>
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		<title>Comment on Interviewing Characters: Follow the Energy by Pink Ink</title>
		<link>http://dalewriting.dale.emery.name/2008/09/10/interviews/comment-page-1/#comment-329</link>
		<dc:creator>Pink Ink</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Sep 2008 13:10:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m with you, running out of steam midway through NaNo.Great idea. I&#039;ll have to try that with my WIP. But I don&#039;t think I&#039;ll be doing NanNo this year.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m with you, running out of steam midway through NaNo.Great idea. I&#8217;ll have to try that with my WIP. But I don&#8217;t think I&#8217;ll be doing NanNo this year.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Interviewing Characters: Follow the Energy by Pink Ink</title>
		<link>http://dalewriting.dale.emery.name/2008/09/10/interviews/comment-page-1/#comment-328</link>
		<dc:creator>Pink Ink</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 13 Sep 2008 06:36:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wow, is it time to start thinking about NaNo already??

Good post, thanks.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wow, is it time to start thinking about NaNo already??</p>
<p>Good post, thanks.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Interviewing Characters: Follow the Energy by Dwayne Phillips</title>
		<link>http://dalewriting.dale.emery.name/2008/09/10/interviews/comment-page-1/#comment-327</link>
		<dc:creator>Dwayne Phillips</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 11 Sep 2008 10:28:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Neat idea. Interview the characters. Have a chat. See what comes out of their mouths. I&#039;ll try this. Thanks</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Neat idea. Interview the characters. Have a chat. See what comes out of their mouths. I&#8217;ll try this. Thanks</p>
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		<title>Comment on Introducing Gibberizer:  Automated Gibberish by Angela</title>
		<link>http://dalewriting.dale.emery.name/2008/06/22/gibberizer/comment-page-1/#comment-326</link>
		<dc:creator>Angela</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 27 Jun 2008 14:42:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Interesting idea!</description>
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		<title>Comment on Outlining and strawberries by Michael Kelly</title>
		<link>http://dalewriting.dale.emery.name/2007/01/10/outlining/comment-page-1/#comment-297</link>
		<dc:creator>Michael Kelly</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 20 Jun 2008 20:58:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>What&#039;s interesting to me about your post, and Terry Brooks&#039; book as well, is that they both make me think of exploratory testing. As you say, &quot;Experiencing was better than thinking, in the same way that eating a strawberry is better than thinking about eating a strawberry.&quot;

In my writing, I find that outlines help me when I&#039;m writing technical articles, but they hinder me when I&#039;m writing fiction. I&#039;m not sure why. I think it might be word count. If I have 3,000 words, outlines help me figure out what&#039;s in scope and out of scope. If I have as much space as I want, I find they constrain me to much and I ignore them. Now I don&#039;t bother making them for fiction.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What&#8217;s interesting to me about your post, and Terry Brooks&#8217; book as well, is that they both make me think of exploratory testing. As you say, &#8220;Experiencing was better than thinking, in the same way that eating a strawberry is better than thinking about eating a strawberry.&#8221;</p>
<p>In my writing, I find that outlines help me when I&#8217;m writing technical articles, but they hinder me when I&#8217;m writing fiction. I&#8217;m not sure why. I think it might be word count. If I have 3,000 words, outlines help me figure out what&#8217;s in scope and out of scope. If I have as much space as I want, I find they constrain me to much and I ignore them. Now I don&#8217;t bother making them for fiction.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Developing Story Ideas by Clustering by Dale</title>
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		<dc:creator>Dale</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 29 May 2008 02:25:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi George.  Yeah, there are a few puzzles for me to solve.  I have a twist in mind for Emile, but I don&#039;t yet know his motivations.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi George.  Yeah, there are a few puzzles for me to solve.  I have a twist in mind for Emile, but I don&#8217;t yet know his motivations.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Developing Story Ideas by Clustering by George Dinwiddie</title>
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		<dc:creator>George Dinwiddie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 29 May 2008 01:01:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>If Norm succeeds, Emile doesn&#039;t have anyone to pay.  If Norm fails, then Emile is in twice the jeopardy that Paulo is in.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>If Norm succeeds, Emile doesn&#8217;t have anyone to pay.  If Norm fails, then Emile is in twice the jeopardy that Paulo is in.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Developing Story Ideas by Clustering by Shruti</title>
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		<dc:creator>Shruti</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 27 May 2008 13:22:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I liked the idea. Clustering also seems a good idea for creating scenes, or so I think. Will definitely try.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I liked the idea. Clustering also seems a good idea for creating scenes, or so I think. Will definitely try.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Developing Story Ideas by Clustering by Dwayne Phillips</title>
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		<dc:creator>Dwayne Phillips</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 26 May 2008 11:36:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great post. I like how you are using the technique for fiction. Now the bad news is I can generate many more ideas for stories that I don&#039;t have time to write. Sigh. It is a good life.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great post. I like how you are using the technique for fiction. Now the bad news is I can generate many more ideas for stories that I don&#8217;t have time to write. Sigh. It is a good life.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Developing Story Ideas by Clustering by Richard Crawford</title>
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		<dc:creator>Richard Crawford</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 23 May 2008 16:40:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I wish I&#039;d discovered this technique myself back when I was in college. It would have saved me years of pointless flailing at my keyboard.

I really liked what you did with &quot;Dinner at Gourlay&#039;s&quot;, by the way. I&#039;d love to see your story about the murderous gambler.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I wish I&#8217;d discovered this technique myself back when I was in college. It would have saved me years of pointless flailing at my keyboard.</p>
<p>I really liked what you did with &#8220;Dinner at Gourlay&#8217;s&#8221;, by the way. I&#8217;d love to see your story about the murderous gambler.</p>
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