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		<title>Fantasy and Science Fiction July 2008</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[Last week John Joseph Adams posted a [promotional giveaway](http://www.sfsite.com/fsf/blog/2008/05/07/get-a-free-copy-of-the-july-2008-issue-of-fsf) for the July 2008 issue of *[The Magazine of Fantasy and Science Fiction](http://www.sfsite.com/fsf/index.html)*. Adams offered a deal: You get the free issue if you promise to blog about it. For the past 25 years I&#8217;ve read very little short fiction. Lately I&#8217;ve been writing some short [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Last week John Joseph Adams posted a [promotional giveaway](http://www.sfsite.com/fsf/blog/2008/05/07/get-a-free-copy-of-the-july-2008-issue-of-fsf) for the July 2008 issue of *[The Magazine of Fantasy and Science Fiction](http://www.sfsite.com/fsf/index.html)*. Adams offered a deal: You get the free issue if you promise to blog about it.</p>
<p>For the past 25 years I&#8217;ve read very little short fiction. Lately I&#8217;ve been writing some short fiction myself, and have become interested in learning what makes excellent short stories excellent. I began picking up the odd copy of F&amp;SF and other speculative fiction magazines to study as well as to enjoy. This promotion seemed right up my alley.</p>
<p>I ordered my copy on Thursday, received it on Saturday, and read the final story tonight.</p>
<p>Here are the stories and my reactions (no spoilers here).</p>
<p>**&#8221;Reader&#8217;s Guide&#8221; by Lisa Goldstein.** I was surprisingly touched by this lovely story about one of the more mysterious aspects of the art of writing fiction. I can&#8217;t say anything about the plot without giving away the beauty of the story, but the story is written in the form of a reader&#8217;s guide.</p>
<p>**&#8221;Fullbrim&#8217;s Finding&#8221; by Matthew Hughes.** A &#8220;discriminator&#8221; goes in search of a client&#8217;s lost husband, who has himself gone in search of the meaning of life. (From this story alone, I get the sense that a discriminator is something like a galactic private investigator. F&amp;SF&#8217;s intro to the story suggests that the main character has appeared in other short stories and novels, and I suspect that &#8220;discriminator&#8221; is clarified in those).</p>
<p>**&#8221;The Roberts&#8221; by Michael Blumlein.** Technology helps a man solve the problem of finding a &#8220;perfect&#8221; mate. But what if the imperfections are not in the mate?</p>
<p>**&#8221;Enfant Terrible&#8221; by Scot Dalrymple.** A story of a man doing a job that is both necessary for the protection of society, and dirty enough that it&#8217;s best kept quiet. Dalrymple tells this story second-person point of view&#8211;i.e. the main character is &#8220;you&#8221;.</p>
<p>**&#8221;Poison Victory&#8221; by Albert E. Chowdrey.** In late 1949, a German chemist struggles to atone for his role in bringing Germany to victory in WWII.</p>
<p>**&#8221;The Dinosaur Train&#8221; by James L. Cambias.** A setback in a family business&#8211;a sort of circus with live dinosaurs&#8211;brings three generations of unresolved conflicts to the moment of truth.</p>
<p>My strongest reactions were to the two more experimental stories. I liked &#8220;Enfant Terrible&#8221; least, specifically because of the second-person point of view. Second-person always makes me fear that the perspective was chosen more for the author&#8217;s amusement than for its ability to illuminate the story. In this case I stumbled over the POV, and it didn&#8217;t offer any compensations that I could see. I liked the story, but I liked it less for the POV.</p>
<p>The story I liked most was &#8220;Reader&#8217;s Guide.&#8221; I enjoyed my initial puzzle of &#8220;how the heck do you tell a story in the form of a reader&#8217;s guide?&#8221; As it turns out, there&#8217;s something about the experimental form that seems necessary to the story. The story itself arises partly from the form, and without that form would not be as effective. That&#8217;s an experiment that works.</p>
<p>When I pick up an issue of a fiction magazine I expect to enjoy one or two of the stories. I enjoyed all six of these stories.</p>
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